Tuesday, December 6, 2011

The Bear by: Madison

Once there were 2 boys. Their names were Shane and Jacob. There were 3 girls too and their names were Jailey, Emma and Kailey. They were all 17 years old. They were all best friends so they decided to go on a camping trip. They went up in to the mountains in Jacob's red pickup truck and Jailey and Kailey rode in Kailey's Mustang. The girls followed Jacob and them up into the mountains. They got to their camping place and put their tent up. It was getting pretty dark so they decided to play night games like normal teenagers do. They started playing hide and seek and it was getting pretty dark and Kailey said, "Let's play on bikes" because she loved riding bikes. They started riding up into the high mountains and when they got to the top they hid and Kailey found a cave and hid in there.
Jacob hid with her and Kailey said, "Wow it's dark in here."
Then Jacob said, "Did you hear that?"
"Hear what?"
So they got on their bikes and rode off. They heard something chasing after them. It sounded like a wold or a bear but they were sure it was a bear. They split up for a moment and Jacob went where the noise was coming from and Kailey went to the opposite side.
Kailey said, "I think it's coming over here."
She got scared because she saw something in the distance charging for her. She tried pedaling but it wouldn't go and right when she could clearly see it, her bike broke. She got off and found another bike sitting by a tree. She got it and rode off but when she was going down the 15-foot cliff her brakes broke. She stared at the bear that was charging for her. She screamed at the top of her lungs for help but that's all she remembered. When she found herself in the hospital with all her friends with red eyes that looked like they had been crying, she didn't know what had happened. She looked around then at her leg and it was gone.
She asked, "What happened?"
Her friend Emma said, "When your bike broke on the cliff a bear came and snatched you. Jacob tried to fight it but the bear was too tough."
"Is he okay?" Kailey asked.
"Yeah but he sprained his wrist," said Jailey.
When Kailey was about to leave the hospital the doctor said, "Make sure you at least try to ride your bike again."
Then they got back to the cabin they found the bike Kailey had her accident on. Her friends held the bike so she could get on okay. Then they started walking her to very fluffy soft grass. They started pushing her. She fell and they all started laughing and then walked her to her bed. She laid there wondering if she would ever be able to ride her bike all by herself again. The next morning she woke up so excited to get back on her bike again. She went outside and called her friends and they held the bike so she could get on okay. They started pushing her to soft grass. The next day they did the same until one day they heard crying. They ran to Kailey's bedroom and she wasn't there. They ran outside and saw Kailey with her one leg riding her bike all by herself. They were so happy and Kailey was crying and she said, "I was crying because someone shot the bear. The other reason I was crying is I went up the hill and down the hill 30 times."
Her friends were so happy that their friend learned how to ride a bike with one leg.

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